Awen Storm Blurb, Call For Feedback

I am still fiddling with Awen Storm's blurb and nearly out of time. This is the latest. What do you think? Any ideas for making it better? (Sorry about the large font, Blogger is messing with me.)

Emily Hester is stranded on a mountain top, in the middle of Zoo Atlanta, with a dragon breathing down her neck. Could today get any worse?

She has managed to learn magic. But how could the druids expect her to save Earth? The little bit she knows won’t rescue her, much less her boyfriend and his nephew.

And that reptilian-alien army amassing in UnderEarth? Forget about it.

There it is. Does it make you want to know more? Would you pick it up to read?

Please leave any suggestions or observations in the comments section below.

Thank you! Olivia/O. J.

P.S. Awen Rising's ebook is still $2.99 (regular $4.99) through the month of April. If you know anyone who is stuck at home during the COVID-19 crisis, please let them know about the sale. Or how about a great, inexpensive gift for friends and family members stuck at home? All for the price of a coffee.

Stay home, stay healthy, and be safe.

~ That Rebel, Olivia J. Herrell, writing as  O. J. Barré

O. J. Barré is the author of the Awen trilogy, a druid sci-fi fantasy set in 2042. Steeped in current, ancient, and future history twists, Book One, Awen Rising (set in Atlanta, Georgia) debuted July 27, 2019, in both ebook and paperback. Book Two, Awen Storm, is slated for release May 1, 2020. Book Three, Awen Tide, arrives May 1, 2021.

O. J. Barré has also penned numerous articles over the last ten years that can be accessed through the blog on this site.